中考英语作文指导(2)
2、写作实践范例指导
根据中英提示词语,写出意思]连贯?符合逻辑,词数在60-90之间的英文,所给英文提示词语都必须用上。格林先生是一位著名医生,挽救了许多病人的生命。他工作很认真,经常很晚回家。一次下班回家途中目睹了一起交通事故:一个司机开车撞倒了骑车的老人后逃跑了,老人受了重伤?格林先生看到后做了些什么。老人怎样了呢。
英文提示:Mr Green, famous, save, work, come off work, help, traffic accident, run away, hit, policeman, operate on, take...to
[本文写作思路、方法点拨]
写本文可以根据中英文提示,按照中文提示的事情发展顺序去组织材料,连词成句,发展段落,同时可以适当增加细节内容和点评?第一段介绍格林先生及工作情况?第二段叙述巧遇交通事故。第三段叙述挽救病人等情况。
参考范文:
Mr Green is a famous doctor. He saves a lot of patients' lives.
He works hard and carefully. He often gets back home very late after work. He is always ready to help others。
One day he saw a traffic accident happen on his way home from work.
Mr Green took the old man to his hospital as quickly as possible after he called the policeman. He tried his best to operate on the old man in the hospital. The old man was saved.
3.新题导练:根据下面的中文提示写出一篇60-90词的英语短
中文提示:2003年10月15日我国成功发射"神州五号"载人宇宙飞船,这是继1999年我国第一艘无人飞船"神州一号"发射以来的又一次伟大的壮举,它向全世界充分显示出中国的科学技术实力。许多航天科技人员和杨利伟等航天人为此做出了巨大的贡献。你对上述内容有何感想。对今后如何打算。
英文提示:manned spacecraft(载人飞船),Shenzhou 5, China's space science and technology, a great feat(伟大壮举), astronaut, set an example (树立榜样), lay solid foundations (打好基础)
书面表达写作指要:本文可以采用三段式来写:1.谈谈你的看法及感想;2.扼要地介绍"神州一号"。"神州五号";3.叙述你受启发后的打算。
One possible version:
I'm very happy when I heard the news that China's first manned spacecraft,Shenzhou 5,was launched on October 15,2003. I would never forget the day when all the Chinese people were proud of the successful launch.
The first unmanned "Shenzhou 1"space craft and "Shenzhou 5" spacecraft, showed China's space science and technology has reached a very high level. The launch of the "Shenzhou 5" is a great feat. The dreams of thousands of astronauts have come true.
I'm a high school student now. Yang Liwei has set a good example for us all. I want to study hard and lay solid foundations for my future. When I grow up, I want to become an astronaut like Yang Liwei.
My friend
I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl. She lives in Jiujiang. She is a middle school student. She has big eyes, a small mouth, a small nose and a round face. She is tall and thin. She likes watching TV and playing the basketball. On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening.
She is a good student. She is good at English. She likes speaking in English. She always reports news in English in her school.
She says we are good friends. We often send e-mails to each other everyday. I like her very much.
