2013年中考作文网(2)
下面给出上文提到的海淀期中考试作文13分范文，供同学们参考。
Hobbies play an important role in our daily life. Playing basketball is one of my hobbies. And I have been playing it since I was a little child.
Although I'm in Grade 9 now, I think I should keep on playing basketball. I believe it never gets in the way of my study. Besides, it's a good way to relax myself and help me concentrate more on my study. I can also make more friends who have the same hobby. And it's really good for my health.
In a word, if I spend suitable time on it, it will make a difference in my study as well as in my life.
点评：文章结构合理，逻辑性强，基本无语法错误。但是句式不够丰富，如果再加上定语从句或闪光句型，将是一篇很好的英语作文。
希望同学们能够充分认识到写作评分标准的重要性，并按照标准要求去规范自己的写作并多加修改，要知道，好文章是改出来的。
